Hello guys, I would love to share with you about things
that I like to do the most. Check this out!
First, I really like TRAVELING, yes I am a traveler
but I am not an adventorous person at all, I like traveling around the world to
know more about the beautiful of nature which are in this real world but I
prefer to know deeper about beautiful scenery which are in my beloved
country, Indonesia. I had visited many places that have beautiful scenery. Some of them are, Bedugul Lake in Bali, Prambanan Temple
in Yogyakarta ,Borobudur Temple in central java, Pahawang Island in my hometown
Lampung, Kuta Beach in Bali,and so on. I like traveling because when I travel
somewhere i feel relaxed, refresh my mind, and even make me forget my
problems for awhile so i feel that I really enjoy my life. Next thing that i
love is playing games, especially online games such as Clash of clans (COC)
and Hay Day. At first, I don’t really like playing game because i thinks it’s
men’s hobby or even habit. But when I play the games continuously, I start to
feel comfortable, and enjoy playing the game. I dont know exactly why i love
playing games, i just feel relaxed when i’m doing that. Last but not least
is playing basketball, actually i am not really good at exercise, including
“Basketball”. But when I was in Senior High School, i had some close friends
who liked playing basketball and even they were athletes and joined some
basketball competition such as DBL, so because my close friends liked that
things, it made me often play basketball and they teached me how to play
basketball properly, so I am not only playing basketball like a game but also
learn how to play basketball properly.
Well, those are mine, how’s yours?? ^^
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| Bedugul Lake in Bali |
Haiii Vitaaa... your writing is great hahaha I can't believe that you like traveling wkwkw and by the way you should type which exist in my beloved country instead of which there hehehe
ReplyDeleteHai Graceee.. Thank you so much Grace :D, okay thank you for your suggestion :)
DeleteVitaaaa, Vina is admiring you here!💖
ReplyDeleteI think you should retype'i' become 'I' but overall it is a very inspiring paragraph!
Haii vina :D, Thank you for your suggestion vina :D
Deletegreat post vita!:) but its' better for you to put all photos related to your story. but overall, i like your post😄 i can't wait to see another post!
ReplyDeleteHaii put :D, Thank you for your suggestion put :)
DeleteHi vita! I think it's better for you write "I would like to share with you about things that I like the most is bla bla" instead of " I would love to share with you about things that I like to do the most" that's all
ReplyDeleteHi lin, thank you for your suggestion lin :D
Deleteit's very interesting articel vitaa !!
ReplyDeleteThank you fia :D, but can you give me some suggestions about my article??
DeleteWAW! Fantastic baby..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much lena :D, but can you give me some suggestion about my article to make it be better ?? :)
Deletevita, I like your writing!! i think your friends brought so many good impact to you, they taught you how to play basketball! I hope you can teach me too!
ReplyDeleteThank you viny! I am not good at playing basketball, maybe if I have become an expert in basketball, i can teach you! :D
DeleteWow I'm really glad to know that we have the same hobby! I love the way you write , Vita! Keep it up ^^
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Indah :D, Oh ya? i hpe oneday we can do our same hobby together!:D
DeleteAmazing article Vita, nice hobbies you have there HAHAHAHA
ReplyDeleteThank you so much antonny :D
DeleteNice blog vita , goodluck on your next blog ^^
ReplyDeleteThank you vallent! :D
DeleteHello Vit!That's the good article :D.But I think the word i supposed to be in capital letter.And I hope I can see your next article.Fighting!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your suggestion merlin! :D
Deletehi vita ! your writing is so good, we have same hobby. hehehe
ReplyDeleteThank you okta! sure! :D
DeleteHey Vita! Good job on your post, I really love it! But I think you spelled "adventurous" wrong, be careful on the vocabulary next time! Good luck on your next post! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you very much astrid for Your suggestion, I will be more be careful on vocabulary later :D
DeleteHi Vita! Your article is very interesting and I'm waiting for your next article! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Elsa! Thank you so much elsa! :D
Deletehalloo Vitaaa.. your blog is good but i found a mistake.. I think it must be "adventurous" instead of "adventorous" and I think overall is great
ReplyDeleteHallooo Dian.. I see, thank you so much for your suggestion dian :D
DeleteHi Vita! I love this one. I believe that this post will be even better if you fix some errors there.
ReplyDeleteThe correct way of saying "beautiful scenery which exist" is by adding the letter "s" at the end of the word "exist", because scenery is a singular form. I'm waiting for your next post. :)
Okay, thank you tira :D, you remind me that actually I want to say beautiful sceneries so it means plural form, it will be okay if I still use exist without S, right?
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ReplyDeleteHello guys, I would like to share with you about things that I like to do the most. Check this out!
First, I really like TRAVELING, yes I am a traveler but I am not an adventurous person at all, I like traveling around the world to know more about the beautiful of natures which exist in this real world but I prefer to know deeper about beautiful sceneries which exist in my beloved country, Indonesia. I had visited many places that have beautiful scenery. Some of them are, Bedugul Lake in Bali, Prambanan Temple in Yogyakarta ,Borobudur Temple in central java, Pahawang Island in my hometown Lampung, Kuta Beach in Bali,and so on. I like traveling because when I travel somewhere I feel relaxed, refresh my mind, and even makes me forget my problems for awhile so I feel that I really enjoy my life. Next thing that I love is playing games, especially online games such as Clash of clans (COC) and Hay Day. At first, I don’t really like playing game because I thinks it’s mostly man’s hobby or even habit. But when I play the games continuously, I start to feel comfortable, and enjoy playing the game. I don’t know exactly why I love playing games, I just feel relaxed when I’m doing that. Last but not least is playing basketball, actually I am not really good at sports, including “Basketball”. But when I was in Senior High School, I had some close friends who liked playing basketball and even they were athletes and joined some basketball competition such as DBL, so because my close friends liked that things, it made me often play basketball and they teached me how to play basketball properly, so I am not only playing basketball like a game but also learn how to play basketball properly.
Well, those are mine, how’s yours?? ^^