Monday 17 October 2016

Do you have problems in your hometown? Here is mine, check this out!

·         Topic sentences:
Paragraph 1: Nowadays there are so many social problems which become the duty of both government and the society.
Paragraph 2: The first problem that my hometown has is overload of garbage.
Paragraph 3: It is important to take action for those main problems.
Paragraph 4: To conclude, the main problems in city can cause other problems that may be more serious and harder to be solved.
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      My composition for this blog:
Paragraph 1: The introduction
There are so many social problems in my hometown.
Paragraph 2: The problems
The problems in my hometown are overload of garbage and unemployment.
Paragraph 3: The solutions
For the overload of garbage we should do 3R (Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle). And for the unemployment, government should provide more job opportunities and improve labor skills by giving training.
Paragraph 4: The conclusion
The main problems in city can cause other serious problem. That’s why it should be solved.

My hometown’s problems
Nowadays there are so many social problems which become the duty of both government and the society.  Actually all parties should take part in solving social problems. We know that Indonesia is one of the countries which has the largest population in the world. So it means that there will be many social problems from different city including my beloved hometown, Metro, Lampung.     
The first problem in my hometown is the overload of garbage. Garbage overload is one of the biggest problems in my hometown, Metro. We can find garbage on the street, river and even in our houses. The garbage usually came from industrial waste and household waste. And the amount of garbage will increase along with the increasing of population and diverse activities. For example, every factory has industrial waste, so when there are more factories operated it will increase the amount of industrial waste. Another main problem is unemployment. Unemployment is defined as the number of people who do not have a job that provides money. As my hometown is one of the city with highest unemployment among other cities in Lampung, it becomes a very difficult problem for government to solve. There are large number of populations in my hometown but there is only limited job opportunities make the problem even worst.
It is important to take action for those main problems. For the first problem, government and society should be responsible for the problems because if it’s not solved, it can cause another problem such as flood. So, to solve the problem we should reduce the garbage by using 3Rs which are reduce, reuse, and recycle. Reduce means that we minimize the things which can only be used for once, such as plastic bags, plastic bottles and so on. For example we can bring our own bags from home so we don’t need to use plastic bags. Trash is usually considered as something that is not worth and no longer useful, but for some people who are creative and innovative, they can convert it into more useful goods, like using modified cans as pots.  That is what we called as reuse. And the last is recycling. The rubbish can be recycled into some items which have value after going through some processes. For example, organic waste can be recycled into compost to fertilize plants and soil. This ways can help reducing waste. But government still need to solve for the unemployment problem. As unemployment could cause poverty, it must be solved as soon as possible. To solve unemployment problem, government should provide more job opportunities. And the society is also encouraged to create their own business. Besides providing more job opportunities, government also need to improve labor skills through internationally certified training. It is hoped that this can reduce the unemployment.
In conclusion, the main problems in a city can cause other serious problems that are harder to solve. That’s why it should be solved as soon as possible. So, as a part of the society we should help government in solving the problems by doing our responsibility.



10 comments:

  1. Haii Vitaa, it's a great article but I think you should write one of yhe country which has hehe

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  2. Hi Vita! I find that you forget to use space in "Garbage overload is one of the biggest problems in my hometown,Metro.", you should use space before word 'metro'. But overall is good :))

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  3. Hi vita ! I found some mistakes there,
    1st, at the 1st paragraph you typed nowadays, it should be now days
    2nd, you said all parties should take a parti think you should describe what kind if parties
    And you should describe where is metro, because i dont know, where is the metro city
    Over all its good !

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  4. Nice article Vita! Keep going :)

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  5. Nah nah ... jelly with u :( great work !

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  6. Good job Vita! i like it very much!

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  7. great post vitaa! :) can't wait so see another post!

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