Monday 10 October 2016

My Partner's Future Success

Lin Karlina: A Successful Wealth Planner

Lin Karlina is one of the best wealth plannner in her hometown, Cikarang. She becomes famous  and successful because she always does her job well. The results of her job always satisfies her boss. It’s not a surprise that she can become a successful wealth planner now  because she always does her best in everything that she’s doing.
Lin Karlina always learns and does exercises about things or subjects which are related with wealth planning since she was in Senior High School when she was around 17 years old. That’s why she chose social as her major in SHS to know and learn more about economic which will be a huge  impact for a job that is related to economic especially wealth planner. After graduating from SHS, she continued her study in President University and she took business administration as her major and she took wealth planning as her concentration. So that’s why she works as a wealth planner now.
Lin karlina has two main characteristics that have led her to achieve success until now.  First, she is a kind of person who is very optimist. She always work hard whatever the condition is and how many obstacles that bother her to reach success. She never care about it and never ever give up. She always tries to solve all of the problems and focused on her future career. Second, she is very discipline. Its means that she always done her assigntment on time and she never come late to class. When she thinks that it’s the time to learn, She will start learning directly without pending it. For example : when she was in SHS, she had start making schedule of her daily activities to manage her time for learning. That’s why she always does her assignment from the company on time and the result is excellent. This makes her boss proud and so lucky to have her as she can help developing the company and because of those things she get a big salaries and bonus from the company. She deserves all of that as a return to her effort. 

28 comments:

  1. That's a great article about Lin. Good blog Vita, keep going! :)

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  2. Good article Vita! keep it up😊

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  3. Hi Vita! Thanks for writing about me XD But I think it's better for you to write "After graduated from SHS" instead of "After graduating from SHS". And you mistyped, "she always done her assigntment on time" you should type "assignment" Overall is good and keep it up :)

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  4. Good job vita! But i wanna suggest you to just use it means rather than its means. Good luck!

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  5. Hallo Vita! :) I think your article is really nice. But u've a mistake at parapraph 3. You should pay attention with the capital letter. 'Lin Karlina' not 'Lin karlina' . Good luck for your next article, Vita!

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  6. Hai Vit,your article is really nice!!! But actually there is a typo in word "assigntment" and it must be "assignment".But overall it's good...

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  7. hai Vit, it's a nice article. keep it up! :)

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  8. Nice article Vita, keep it up!!

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  9. hi vita!:) i think after you write "always" you shouldn't use does, because there's a verb in your sentence that you already use with -s or -es.but overall, i like your post😄 i can't wait to see another post!

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    1. Thank you put :D, I will consider your suggestion :)

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  10. Hi Vita the champion, Vitachamp :v. No i am just kidding. btw i like your writing style so much, even there are some mistakes that your friends have fixed it for you. keep it up and make a new post ! I am waiting for it. thank you.

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    1. amen the champion hahahaa, Thank you ronaldooooooo :D

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  11. Nice article Vita! I'll be looking forward to your next post! :D

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  12. Nice article Vita ! So inspiring !!

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  13. Nice article Vita ! Keep it up

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  14. REVISION:

    Lin Karlina: A Successful Wealth Planner

    Lin Karlina is one of the best wealth plannner in her hometown, Cikarang. She becomes famous and successful because she always does her job well. The results of her job always satisfies her boss. It’s not a surprise that she can become a successful wealth planner now because she always does her best in everything that she’s doing.
    Lin Karlina always learns and does exercises about things or subjects which are related with wealth planning since she was in Senior High School when she was around 17 years old. That’s why she chose social as her major in SHS to know and learn more about economic which will be a huge impact for a job that is related to economic especially wealth planner. After She graduated from SHS, she continued her study in President University and she took business administration as her major and she took wealth planning as her concentration. So that’s why she works as a wealth planner now.
    Lin Karlina has two main characteristics that have led her to achieve success until now. First, she is a kind of person who is very optimist. She always work hard whatever the condition is and how many obstacles that bother her to reach success. She never care about it and never ever give up. She always tries to solve all of the problems and focused on her future career. Second, she is very discipline. It means that she always done her assignment on time and she never come late to class. When she thinks that it’s the time to learn, She will start learning directly without pending it. For example : when she was in SHS, she had start making schedule of her daily activities to manage her time for learning. That’s why she always does her assignment from the company on time and the result is excellent. This makes her boss proud and so lucky to have her as she can help developing the company and because of those things, she get a big salaries and bonus from the company. She deserves all of that as a return to her effort.

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  15. Great post! Really enjoyed reading it :)

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