Thursday 8 December 2016

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

Thesis: Lecturers are not responsible for motivating students to learn.
1st argument:  College students are already mature enough.
2nd argument: The main motivation comes from your self.
3rd argument: Lecturers are not the one and only source of student’s motivation to learn in university.
Contour argument: Lecturers have big impact in teaching-learning process in a university.
Conclusion: Motivation student to learn is not lecturer’s responsibility.

Motivation is defined as the process that initiates, guides, and maintains goal-oriented behaviors. Motivation is what causes us to act, whether it is getting a glass of water to reduce thirst or reading a book to gain knowledge. If it is for college student, I think they are already mature enough. So, I do believe that lecturers are not responsible to motivate students to learn.

College students are already mature enough. Based on psychology fact people who already mature enough, they are able to control and manage their selves about their emotional, behavior how to act in whatever the condition is. They should place their selves in a proper condition. They also have their own principal. They have to adapt with whatever the situation and condition is, even when the lecturer doesn't support them to learn, they still control their selves and keep on their mood to study. They must make their own motivation for themselves not depend on people or especially lecturer.

The main motivation comes from your own self. Like Amit Ray said that  “You are your master. Only you have the master keys to open the inner locks.”so the key of motivation also come from your own self not from the other people. So no matter how hard the lecturer try to motivate the students to learn if they don’t want to change,  it will not change and the lecturer’s motivation will not affect them at all.

Lecturers are not the one and only source of student’s motivation to learn in university. Nowadays, there are so many ways to motivate students, not only from lecturers. For example, in university there are events or seminar that can support and motivate college student to learn. Based on my personal experience, I have a friend who is a college student who is taught by lecturers who are very lazy and even don’t support them to learn. But luckily there are so many motivation seminars and events in her university which can help her to motivate herself from the other source.

Lecturers have big impact in teaching-learning process in a university. Then, many people assume that because lecturers have big impact in teaching-learning process in a university. It means that the lecturers have responsibility in motivation their students because they think that if the lecturers can motivate students to learn, the teaching –learning process can run well.  But in the truth, there are so many students that the lecturers teach. So it will be impossible for the lecturer to be responsible in motivating their students one by one because lecturers are also a human, they have limited capacity in controlling many people.

A college student is already mature enough so they can control and manage themselves. They may not be dependent person. And also the motivation will affect more if the motivation comes from their own selves. It will be greater than it should be. However, the motivation will be back to the student’s personal itself. So, motivation student to learn is not lecturer’s responsibility.

22 comments:

  1. Great virtina ! I really love ur essay tho. But u have to pay attention on using coma. Seems like u missed some comas in your essay. Also, U used simple vocabs in your essay but u could arranged them become an refreshing article !

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  2. Hi Vita, your article is very understandable, it is indeed a very interesting article and I'm amazed by your skill in writing article.
    Wide variety of vocabulary and grammar structures are used correctly.
    You are expressing your idea and position clearly and you connect them in a way that is very great.
    You have a great way to express your words into organized way of writing.
    Your article is flawless and I can not find any error in it.
    Good job and I'm waiting for the next article :)

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  3. Nice writing, Vita! Overall your essay is good, but in the outline, it should be 'counter argument' not 'contour' as it is a different term :)

    And as for you essay, in the last paragraph, there is a sentence "They may not be dependent person.". I get what you mean, but it will fit your meaning more if you use 'should' instead of 'may'.

    That's all of my suggestion, keep up the good work!

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    1. I see, thank you for your suggestion cynthia, it does helpful :D

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  4. Hai Vita! Your essay is great. it is easy to read and really well-packed. you also have many vocabularies. but, I think I found some mistakes when I read it. You should write motivate student to learn abd also you should type ' doesn't ' . Overall it's good ! Keep it up!

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    1. Thank you grace, I will be more careful later :D

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  5. Hi Vita. I think you have to pay attention to the use spacing on each sentence and after the point. There is the incorrect word on the first paragraph, "behaviors" should be behavior.
    There are mistyped on the second paragraph, "doesnt" should doesn't.
    And Vita, on the contour argument, I think you should change it or add supporting points (sentence/paragraph) that make more sense with the title that you created, because your essay is about "Lecturers are not responsible for motivating students to learn", right? Not Lecturers are responsible for bla bla. So, it's be better if you change your counter argument. Thank you.

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  6. Hai vita ! I think your thesis is good. Even there are some mistakes like spacing errors and the other error, your thesis still good. your vocabularies also good when you explaining your opinion, you make it clear. keep it up Vita!

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  7. hi Vita ! i couldn't agree more with your argument. you express your arguments clearly. but i think you must pay more attention to the punctuation and etc. it's beter if you give some space between the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd argument in the top. also i found some typos in your argument.
    for the sentence " they still control their selves and keep on their mood to study." i think it's better if you put word (need to) before control. overall your article is really good ! good work Vita !

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  8. Although we don't share the same thought, but I really love your article. I find it is so interesting to get to know more from the perspective of someone else. I think your vocabulary has been good. Perhaps you need to pay more attention to the grammar. Overall it is great.

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  9. Hi vita ! We write the same article about lecturers are not responsible for motivating student to learn. I strongly agree with your opinion. Your vocabulary is very good. Keep it up !

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  10. Hi,Vita! I totally agree with your argument because we have the same opinion...
    I think your word "their selves" must be "themselves". Overall your vocabulary and grammar is good enough..Keep spirit,Vita!

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  11. REVISION:

    Thesis: Lecturers are not responsible for motivating students to learn.

    1st argument: College students are already mature enough.

    2nd argument: The main motivation comes from yourself.

    3rd argument: Lecturers are not the one and only source of student’s motivation to learn in university.

    Counter argument: Lecturers have big impact in teaching-learning process in a university.

    Conclusion: Motivation student to learn is not lecturer’s responsibility

    Motivation is defined as the process that initiates, guides, and maintains goal-oriented behavior. Motivation is what causes us to act, whether it is getting a glass of water to reduce thirst or reading a book to gain knowledge. If it is for college student, I think they are already mature enough. So, I do believe that lecturers are not responsible to motivate students to learn.

    College students are already mature enough. Based on psychology fact people who already mature enough, they are able to control and manage their selves about their emotional, behavior how to act in whatever the condition is. They should place their selves in a proper condition. They also have their own principal. They have to adapt with whatever the situation and condition is, even when the lecturer doesnt support them to learn, they still need to control their selves and keep on their mood to study. They must make their own motivation for themselves not depend on people or especially lecturer.

    The main motivation comes from your own self. Like Amit Ray said that “You are your master. Only you have the master keys to open the inner locks.” So, the key of motivation also come from your own self not from the other people. So no matter how hard the lecturer try to motivate the students to learn if they don’t want to change, it will not change and the lecturer’s motivation will not affect them at all.

    Lecturers are not the one and only source of student’s motivation to learn in university. Nowadays, there are so many ways to motivate students, not only from lecturers. For example, in university there are events or seminar that can support and motivate college student to learn. Based on my personal experience, I have a friend who is a college student who is taught by lecturers who are very lazy and even don’t support them to learn. But luckily there are so many motivation seminars and events in her university which can help her to motivate herself from the other source.

    Lecturers have big impact in teaching-learning process in a university. Then, many people assume that because lecturers have big impact in teaching-learning process in a university. It means that the lecturers have responsibility in motivation their students because they think that if the lecturers can motivate students to learn, the teaching-learning process can run well. But in the truth, there are so many students that the lecturers teach. So it will be impossible for the lecturer to be responsible in motivating their students one by one because lecturers are also a human, they have limited capacity in controlling many people.

    A college student is already mature enough so they can control and manage themselves. They should not be dependent person. And also the motivation will affect more if the motivation comes from their own selves. It will be greater than it should be. However, the motivation will be back to the student’s personal itself. So, motivation student to learn is not lecturer’s responsibility.

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