Paragraph 1 (Introduction) : Have
you ever felt that you have no friends who care of you? Do you ever feel lonely
because you have no friend? This happened to me when I was in Junior High
School. I thought that all of my friends didn’t care about me. Until one day something happened that changed my thought toward
them. Let me explain how it happened and how it changed my thought.
Topic Sentences :
Paragraph 2 : When I was in Junior High School, I
wanted to be like the other students who have a lot of
friends to study with.
Paragraph 3 : Then one day, it was my birthday.
Paragraph 4 : From those things I can learn that, I may not judge people by the way they act in front of you.
Have you ever felt that you have no friends who care of you? Do you ever feel lonely because you have no friend? This happened to me when I was in Junior High School. I thought that all of my friends didn’t care about me. Until one day something happened that changed my thought toward them. Let me explain how it happened and how it changed my thought.
Paragraph 4 : From those things I can learn that, I may not judge people by the way they act in front of you.
Have you ever felt that you have no friends who care of you? Do you ever feel lonely because you have no friend? This happened to me when I was in Junior High School. I thought that all of my friends didn’t care about me. Until one day something happened that changed my thought toward them. Let me explain how it happened and how it changed my thought.
When I was in Junior High School, I wanted to be like the other students who have a lot of friends to study with. But the things that happened
in reality were out of my expectations. I
thought that I can have so many good friends there. But they aren’t. My friends treat me so badly that
they even saw me like an enemy. They
mocked me in every single thing that I did. I don’t
even know whether they did it in
purpose or not. They never understand about my feeling. They
just treated
me like an enemy. How did it feel? It hurt me so deeply, and it even broke my heart. I never think that my
friends in Junior High School will treat me like that. I never disturb them. I
just want to make friend with them. But they didn’t even respect me. Day by day past, but there
is no change in the way they treat me.
Then one day, it was my birthday. I felt so lonely, disappointed, angry,
and I even
want to cry. There is no friend who say happy birthday to me. But, I can’t do anything. They don’t even remember
my birthday. Until I arrived at my home and I saw there are so many decorations
for birthday party. Those are very amazing and beautiful, it made me feel better. At first, I
thought that my family who did it for me. But, I was wrong. It’s my Junior High School
friends who did it for me. How I can believe that, I never think that they will
do it for me. There comes in many
questions in my mind. Is it true? Did they really do it for me? How could they
do it? And then, they suddenly come from behind me and bring me a beautiful
birthday cake. I was so touched at that time and I even want to cry because
of the happiness that I never felt before. Then, I hugged them directly. I said
that I love them so much. After that, they apologize to me because of the bad
things that they had done to me. And I directly forgive them. And that day made my day.
Thank you so much to my friend.
From those things I can learn that, I may not judge people by the
way they act in front of you. You must not think negative about everything that they’re doing. Sometimes it's out of our minds,right? but it really happened and you will
never imagine that they can be so important for you one day.
I think your friends just didn't know how to be close to you vita!! Keep positive in everything!! Nice sharing!!
ReplyDeleteGood story Vita! I'm so excited when reading it! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteVery good article Vita! Keep going! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat one Vita.. At first I thought.. Poor you,, I can't even imagine, there would be someone who are cruel enough to you thinking that you are so small.. But after the story end, it is touching, they love you after all.. Great writing Vitaa !
ReplyDeleteHallo Vita :) I think you should think positive. It will good for you. Keep spirit! God bless u abundantly
ReplyDeleteI also have ever felt like that before but turned out it's just me over thinking. Nice article!
ReplyDeleteGood job Vita! Keep it up :)
ReplyDeleteI like ur writing style Vita ! Keep it up
ReplyDeleteI couldn't agree more with you! There are still some grammar mistakes but your storyline is very interesting. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGreat story vita !
ReplyDeleteNice article vita. Keep it up! :)
ReplyDeleteYou're right, Vita. We shouldn't judge people that quick. Thanks for posting, this is 👍👍👍.
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