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Topic sentences:
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1: Nowadays there are so many social problems which become the duty of both government and the society.
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2: The first problem that my hometown has is overload of garbage.
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3: It is important to take action for those main problems.
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4: To conclude, the main problems in city can cause other problems that may be
more serious and harder to be solved.
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My composition for this blog:
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1: The introduction
There are
so many social problems in my hometown.
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2: The problems
The
problems in my hometown are overload of
garbage and unemployment.
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3: The solutions
For the
overload of garbage we should do 3R (Reduce,
Reuse, and Recycle). And for the unemployment, government
should provide more job opportunities and improve labor skills by giving
training.
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4: The conclusion
The main
problems in city can cause other serious problem. That’s why it should be
solved.
Nowadays
there are so many social problems which become
the duty of both government
and the society. Actually all parties
should take part in solving social problems. We know that
Indonesia is one of the countries which has the largest
population in the world. So it means that there will be many social problems from different city
including my beloved hometown, Metro, Lampung.
The
first problem in my hometown is the overload of
garbage. Garbage overload is one of
the biggest problems in my hometown, Metro.
We can find garbage on the street, river and even in our
houses. The garbage usually came
from industrial waste and household waste. And the amount of garbage will increase along with the
increasing of population and diverse activities. For example, every factory has industrial waste, so when there are more factories operated it will increase the amount of industrial waste. Another main problem is
unemployment. Unemployment is defined as the number of people who do not have a job that provides money.
As my hometown is one of the city with highest unemployment among other cities
in Lampung, it becomes a very difficult problem for government to solve. There
are large number of populations in my hometown but there is only limited job opportunities make the
problem even worst.
It
is important to take action for those main problems. For the first problem, government and society should be responsible for the problems because if it’s not solved,
it can cause another problem such as flood. So, to solve the problem we should
reduce the garbage by using 3Rs which are reduce, reuse, and recycle. Reduce means that we
minimize the things which can only be used for once, such as plastic bags,
plastic bottles and so on. For example we can
bring our own bags from home so we don’t need to use plastic bags. Trash is usually considered as something that is not worth and
no longer useful, but for some people who are creative and innovative, they can
convert it into more useful
goods, like using modified cans as pots.
That is what we called as reuse. And the last is recycling. The rubbish can
be recycled into some items which have value after going through some processes. For example, organic
waste can be recycled into compost to fertilize plants and soil. This ways can help reducing waste. But government still need to solve for
the unemployment problem. As unemployment could cause poverty, it must
be solved as soon as possible. To solve unemployment problem, government should
provide more job opportunities. And
the society is also encouraged to create their own business. Besides providing
more job opportunities, government also need to improve labor skills through
internationally certified training. It is hoped
that this can reduce the unemployment.
In conclusion, the main problems in a city can cause other serious problems that are harder to solve. That’s why it should be solved as soon as possible. So, as a part of the society we should help government in solving the problems by doing our responsibility.
In conclusion, the main problems in a city can cause other serious problems that are harder to solve. That’s why it should be solved as soon as possible. So, as a part of the society we should help government in solving the problems by doing our responsibility.
Haii Vitaa, it's a great article but I think you should write one of yhe country which has hehe
ReplyDeleteHi Vita! I find that you forget to use space in "Garbage overload is one of the biggest problems in my hometown,Metro.", you should use space before word 'metro'. But overall is good :))
ReplyDeleteHi vita ! I found some mistakes there,
ReplyDelete1st, at the 1st paragraph you typed nowadays, it should be now days
2nd, you said all parties should take a parti think you should describe what kind if parties
And you should describe where is metro, because i dont know, where is the metro city
Over all its good !
Nice article vita!!😊
ReplyDeleteNice article Vita! Keep going :)
ReplyDeleteNah nah ... jelly with u :( great work !
ReplyDeleteGood job Vita! i like it very much!
ReplyDeleteNice post Vita :D
ReplyDeleteGood job vita! ^^
ReplyDeletegreat post vitaa! :) can't wait so see another post!
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