Helloooo Guyssss! :D I would like to tell you about my
partner and her dream
A Future Wealth Planner
She is Lin Karlina, I usually call her Lin because I think
it’s a very simple name to be called and remebered. She is from Cikarang. Her house is very close to
President University.
It’s just about 20 minutes. I don’t know her before. I just know her when I first came to President
University and luckily we are in the same dormitory, so we can know each other
easier. As I know, she is a kind of person who is opstimist, responsible and can cooperate well, and she also likes counting. Therefore, I think she would be a great wealth planner.
Firstly, Lin is very optimist. She always work hard
and do her best with positive mind. Even when she is down with so many
obstacles that bother her to reach her dream , she always cheer herself up and
never give up.
Secondly, Lin is responsible and can cooperate well. In every
task or assignment which are given to her, she always does it well. She also
does her assignment on time. And she can cooperate with people in an organization and it’s proven when she
joined in an organization when she was in Senior High School. So it’s
a good point for her to be able to work in an office.
Finally, Lin likes counting or something that related
with numbers. So, she
wants to work as wealth planner in an office. She actually doesn’t like to work
outdoor so we prefer to work indoor. It’s very suitable for her to work in an office as a great
wealth planner.
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Optimist
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And here She is hahaha :D,
What do you think about her? She is beautiful right? :D HAHAHA
I do hope that she can reach her
dream, of course for being a great Wealth Planner in the future Haha.Well
Ithink that’s all about my friend’s future career, Now you have known more
about her but.... if you want to know more more and more about her, just contact
her........ No no I am just kidding hehe
:D
Thank you for reading and don’t
forget to comment, GBU :)
Hi Vita !! Thanks for writting about me. You makes me laugh hahaha XD I was touched ;) Overall it's great Vita ! I'll wait for your next articles! Keep it up
ReplyDeleteThank you lin :D
DeleteHi Vita! This is a really good article and I like it so much, but you
ReplyDeleteshould've typed "remembered" instead of "remebered". That's all and keep blogging! :)
I see, thank you for your correction elsa :D
DeleteHaii Vitaaa ! It's a really great writing hahaha.. Keep it up !!
ReplyDeleteThank you grace :D
Deletehi Vita ! good article ! hope she can be a wealth planner O:)
ReplyDeletei think i find an error, " She actually doesn’t like to work outdoor so we prefer to work indoor."
word we should be she
waiting for your next article
That's right dinda, I am mistaken, thank you for your correction :D
DeleteGreat article Vita, keep it up broo!
ReplyDeleteThank you antonny :D
DeleteNice article, Vita! I spot a small typo 'opstimist' it should be 'optimist'. Keep up the good work:D
ReplyDeleteThat's right cynthia, I see now, thank you for your correction :D
DeleteWow, that's cool! I think in the second paragraph, 'Firstly, Lin is very optimist' actually right, but it will be better if you add 'person' word, 'Firstly, Lin is very optimist Person' like that :) can't wait for your next article
ReplyDeleteGood suggestion len, thank you so much :D
DeleteHI vitaa your article is so nice, i like your article. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteThank you okta :D
DeleteNice post Vita! Really enjoyed reading it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you astrid :D
Deletei like your article vita!! keep writing!!
ReplyDeleteThank you viny :D
DeleteSuch a good article, Vita! Can't wait for your next post :)
ReplyDeleteThank you nisa :D
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ReplyDeleteMy Friend's Future Career
Helloooo Guyssss! :D I would like to tell you about my partner and her dream
A Future Wealth Planner
She is Lin Karlina, I usually call her Lin because I think it’s a very simple name to be called and remembered. She is from Cikarang. Her house is very close to President University. It’s just about 20 minutes. I don’t know her before. I just know her when I first came to President University and luckily we are in the same dormitory, so we can know each other easier. As I know, she is a kind of person who is optimist, responsible and can cooperate well, and she also likes counting. Therefore, I think she would be a great wealth planner.
Firstly, Lin is a very optimist person. She always work hard and do her best with positive mind. Even when she is down with so many obstacles that bother her to reach her dream , she always cheer herself up and never give up.
Secondly, Lin is responsible and can cooperate well. In every task or assignment which are given to her, she always does it well. She also does her assignment on time. And she can cooperate with people in an organization and it’s proven when she joined in an organization when she was in Senior High School. So it’s a good point for her to be able to work in an office.
Finally, Lin likes counting or something that related with numbers. So, she wants to work as wealth planner in an office. She actually doesn’t like to work outdoor so she prefer to work indoor. It’s very suitable for her to work in an office as a great wealth planner.
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Main idea :Optimist
Supportng points :
-Work hard
- Never give up
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Main idea : Responsible and cooperate well
Supporting points :
- Discipline
- Experience in joining an organization
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Main idea : Good at counting
Supporting points :
- She likes everything related with numbers
- She likes to work indoor